DoctorDJ 341 / 7,754 Report Post Posted January 24, 2018 @Finnick i took some of your advice on the last video for my new one any more? Share this post Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Finnick 2,355 / 32,330 Report Post Posted January 24, 2018 A good improvement but for the silent/awkward moments you should just cut up and for that cinematic blackbar part you should let the music play straight and mute the talking / background sounds so you can try get the stuff in sync The font you use is okay, but kind of blurry when it's bigger also the Finding nemo part (IMO) should have the noise that guy made instead of the regular "MOY MOY MOY MOY" or however you spell it idc Kind of like this https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AXTXzfZF_rU Share this post Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options... Achievements
Eli 708 / 11,596 Report Post Posted January 24, 2018 The too be continued didnt really make sense, I personally didn't like the music for the cinematic part, the fact you pointed it out, the Asian things part, or the font. I think it should be less cartoony. i didn't think it made sense. overall, better than the last one good job STEAM Share this post Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
DoctorDJ 341 / 7,754 Report Post Posted January 25, 2018 @Eli asian things part ?? @Finnick yeah the finding nemo part would have been better if i did that the font i was just testing the water to see how i liked it it will probably be different next time but if you have a suggested font feel free to tell me btw Finnick its "mine mine mine" Share this post Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
