NewNebula12 79 / 4,755 Report Post Posted March 14, 2017 And here, we, GO! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Im tired of this bullshit, Get ready, Gon' punch ya' with an iron fist. Im gonna leave- Im gonna be free. But does this world really need me? Im just some autistic fuck, that's what people see in me, not some kid who needs help gettin' back into the swing of things. Im repeatedly slammin' my face into the wall, If someone would help, I could work until the sky falls. I think I'm going crazy... Would someone, PLEASE, just save me! I don't wanna die, but I don't really think I can survive... "Kill yourself.", Nope, I'm not leaving 'til I make some change, Not gonna die until my children can do the same and thrive. Now that I think about it.... Now that i think about it.... "About what?" About how i'm gonna have kids, if no one even wants me here! I guess I'll do what im told, and go die at the hanging tree. Who am I to you, some kid with fleeting suicidal thoughts? Who am I to you, a child hiding behind some cardboard box? Who am I to you, some guy with ADHD, who you find annoyin'? Who am I to you, one little kid that wants to fly or somethin'? Now would ya' please tell me... Who, Am I, To You. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Thanks for looking at my song. Laters. Hello from all the animals~ Share this post Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
KnightOfValour 8 / 1,747 Report Post Posted March 14, 2017 I actually love it. It has a modern taste to it with the lyrics with a deep meaning. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
NewNebula12 79 / 4,755 Report Post Posted March 14, 2017 Thank you (✿•́3•̀)つ Hello from all the animals~ Share this post Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
RVFK 1,037 / 15,970 Report Post Posted March 14, 2017 Edited March 14, 2017 by LegendaryFluff Deep. Very deep story to it, I like it. Very nice Music is a story, this is obviously a very deep story, but it works. It needs more of a 'musical flow' to it. It's more of a rant, a bunch on words for say. If this had a proper musical format, I would enjoy it much more. Keep it up, you have potential. Edited March 14, 2017 by LegendaryFluff Share this post Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
NewNebula12 79 / 4,755 Report Post Posted March 14, 2017 OWO who are you .-. ~~~~ Glad you liked it (✿•́3•̀)つ Hello from all the animals~ Share this post Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Katie 151 / 3,949 Report Post Posted March 14, 2017 Not my style, but I respect it. Music is a really cool thing. It lets people have an outlet for their emotions, and others can relate to it so they feel a little less alone, and no one can say it's bad as it your own creation and it's what you perceive. Keep going, pal. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options... Achievements
ScootypTooty 371 / 8,393 Report Post Posted March 15, 2017 I think it's pretty cool. It's a good start You should keep us posted with your progress! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
NewNebula12 79 / 4,755 Report Post Posted March 15, 2017 But... Wut if I can't think of anything else to write? .-. Hello from all the animals~ Share this post Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Herbert 152 / 4,337 Report Post Posted March 15, 2017 did u write this because of zs? strange timing. Senior Admin on GFL Gmod ZS , Official Meme God of ZS, Squeaker Killer. Deathcore is life Share this post Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
NewNebula12 79 / 4,755 Report Post Posted March 16, 2017 On 3/15/2017 at 9:31 AM, Herbert said: did u write this because of zs? strange timing. No actually, Surprised you think so Hello from all the animals~ Share this post Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skittlez 721 / 11,279 Report Post Posted March 16, 2017 I'm not one for somewhat personal songs (More of a instrumental guy) however, I do like this. Your writing explains (I'm assuming) your life very well without being straight forward. Keep up the writing man, hope to see a part two or a second song (: Share this post Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
NewNebula12 79 / 4,755 Report Post Posted March 17, 2017 AHHHHHH GET OUTTAAA MAH HOUSEEEEEEEEEEee ~~~~~~` Thank you for reading :D Hello from all the animals~ Share this post Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
NewNebula12 79 / 4,755 Report Post Posted March 17, 2017 Edited March 17, 2017 by The_Teddy_Bear_Muffin On 3/15/2017 at 9:31 AM, Herbert said: did u write this because of zs? strange timing. Herbert jumps on and acts like a meanie! GET HIM MY MINIONS! Or not, Your choice BUT STILL! I'D PREFER IF YOU GET HIM! Edited March 17, 2017 by The_Teddy_Bear_Muffin Hello from all the animals~ Share this post Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
